Monday, 4 April 2016


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  1. Anonymous12 April 2016 at 06:19

    I think this is a very good topic to write about. But the dialog is a little to short and when you get to the end it says i'm i'm like your still in the dialog so it gets a little confusing

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  2. Anonymous12 April 2016 at 06:37

    you have some spelling mistakes and i think you can add more to the first paragraph to make it more interesting

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  3. Anonymous20 April 2016 at 07:05

    hey

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